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Need some feedback

Wed Nov 18, 2009, 6:17 PM
  • Mood: Stumped
So this is a journal specifically made for me to beg. Never fear; I can beg quite nicely if I wish. I might even add "pretty please with whipped cream and chocolate syrup and a cherry on top". But don't hold your breath.

So I have a story I've been wanting to write seriously for some time now, but I've always been dubious on execution (the story, of course) and if it's even something that most would find interesting. I'll probably write it anyways, for myself, but I was wondering what you guys (i.e. the two or three people that read my journal ramblings) think.

The basic plotline goes something like this: a magic land, inhabited by both dinosaurs and people, being threatened by a wicked tyrant, a young girl chosen to undergo a magic transformation that will render her practically invincible so she can fight said tyrant, etc.

Wanting some feedback on this idea. I've had someone tell me it sounds rather childish, but personally I think such a story could be executed without degenerating into a children's tale.

So...there's your assignment for the week, I'll probably get back to it when I get back from VA. (Mom doesn't have high speed.....so it would take ages for this page to load).

Have a Happy Thanksgiving if I can't get on here before then. Ta-ta!
*has melons thrown at her for saying 'ta-ta'*

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:iconfantastical-dreamer:
*Sidles up really slowly to [insert your name here]...* YALUALALAICKMAULLYLOLLYMICKYDOOWOP!

*Poke*

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:iconithilwentheninjette:
NI!

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La fête de poisson, comme un guerre, est plus haut que mon pieds. Il dors dan ma tête, and je l'aime.
:iconshinjiasuka4ever:
Thanks for the fav!

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:iconithilwentheninjette:
No problem :-)

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"The Vorlons do not scamper terribly well, but no one has yet told them this."-J. Michael Straczynski

La fête de poisson, comme un guerre, est plus haut que mon pieds. Il dors dan ma tête, and je l'aime.
:iconarmadria:
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What has science done?? XDD

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:iconithilwentheninjette:
LOL. That could make a great Japanese horror movie.

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"The Vorlons do not scamper terribly well, but no one has yet told them this."-J. Michael Straczynski

La fête de poisson, comme un guerre, est plus haut que mon pieds. Il dors dan ma tête, and je l'aime.
:iconarmadria:
I'd pay in sparkly vampires to see that. XDD

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Beep beep! :noes:
:iconithilwentheninjette:
Oh dear, no sparkly vampires. Those things scare me XD

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"The Vorlons do not scamper terribly well, but no one has yet told them this."-J. Michael Straczynski

La fête de poisson, comme un guerre, est plus haut que mon pieds. Il dors dan ma tête, and je l'aime.
:iconarmadria:
Me too :iconimsparklyplz:

:noes:

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Beep beep! :noes:

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